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Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to him using a hands-free headset.
Revise the passage to correct any unclear antecedents.
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Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Pautyhile they walked over to the park. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset.
Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico talked to Paul using a hands-free headset while helping him on the playground slide.
Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Helping his son on the playground slide, Enrico talked to him using a hands-free headset.
Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset.
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The last revision is correct:
"Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset."
It removes the ambiguous pronoun "him" by naming Paul explicitly.
"Enrico had to work from home and take care of his two-year-old son. They walked over to the park, and while there, Enrico planned to make a call to his co-worker Paul. Enrico, helping his son on the playground slide, talked to Paul using a hands-free headset."
It removes the ambiguous pronoun "him" by naming Paul explicitly.
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