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Read the sentence from a student’s essay about “The Treasure of Lemon Brown.”
Greg changes the way that he thinks about his father after he speaks with Lemon Brown.
What is the best way to revise this sentence?
Greg has different feelings about his father after he speaks with Lemon Brown.
Greg sees his father in a new way after he speaks with Lemon Brown.
Greg knows what his father is all about after he speaks with Lemon Brown.
Greg appreciates his father more after he speaks with Lemon Brown.
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"Greg sees his father in a new way after he speaks with Lemon Brown."
This revision is concise, formal, and clearly expresses the change in Greg’s perspective. The other choices are either vague ("different feelings"), too informal/absolute ("knows what his father is all about"), or add a specific judgment ("appreciates his father more") that isn't as neutral.
This revision is concise, formal, and clearly expresses the change in Greg’s perspective. The other choices are either vague ("different feelings"), too informal/absolute ("knows what his father is all about"), or add a specific judgment ("appreciates his father more") that isn't as neutral.
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