Question

EVs can be expensive up front, and charging stations are not yet available in all areas.

Which revision of the sentence best improves clarity and precision?

(1 point)
Responses

EVs are kind of pricey, and there aren’t that many charging spots around yet.
EVs are kind of pricey, and there aren’t that many charging spots around yet.

Buying an EV costs a lot of money at first, and finding a place to plug it in is sometimes tough.
Buying an EV costs a lot of money at first, and finding a place to plug it in is sometimes tough.

Electric vehicles often have a high initial purchase price, and limited charging infrastructure can make them less convenient for some drivers.
Electric vehicles often have a high initial purchase price, and limited charging infrastructure can make them less convenient for some drivers.

EVs can cost money, and you might not always be able to charge them near you.

Answer 1

"Electric vehicles often have a high initial purchase price, and limited charging infrastructure can make them less convenient for some drivers."

This version is more precise (uses "initial purchase price" and "charging infrastructure") and more formal/clear than the others.