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Section 2: Analyze- What do you see?
Dear Diary… What Just Happened?: Pretend that you are Mr. White, Mrs. White, or even poor Herbert. Write a diary entry from the night the final wish is made. Include any thoughts, fears, confusion, or horror. What do you believe happened? What are your regrets? (Note: You will write the diary entry as if you ARE one of the characters, so use first-person pronouns like “I” and “me.”)
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Dear Diary,
Tonight I have done something for which there can be no penance, and even these hands tremble to set it down. The house is still now, but my head is full of the knocking and that dreadful, creeping sound at the door that will not leave me.
It began as all of it began — with a foolish, idle joke. How small a thing, a thoughtless wish for two hundred pounds, and how monstrous in its consequence. I have walked the rooms a hundred times and can still see Herbert laughing at my foolishness, alive and cheeky, and then the next day — nothing. Two hundred pounds and a son's absence. That money sits on the mantel-piece like a small, fat ghost.
Sergeant-Major Morris warned me, he warned us, as plainly as any voice can warn a man of his fate, and I laughed him off. "Monkey's paw," he said. "Three wishes. Don't be a fool with it." God forgive me, I was the fool. How I wish he had burned it before it reached our door.
Mrs. White is shattered — more shattered than I have words for. After that second wish — God help me — when she took the paw and cried for our boy to come back, I stood rooted, listening as if I could hold time with my ears. Then the knocking started: slow, uncertain at first, then, as if gathering courage, driving itself into the nerves.
She raved, and with that feverish hope that only a mother can have, she fumbled with the bolts and the door. I saw the lines of her face, the wildness, the hands of a woman who had lost all restraint. I could not let her open that door. I could not have her see what might stand there — some horror stitched together by a wish and the loopholes of fate. The thought of her shrinking back from her own son, or of what might lurk on the threshold and harm her, was too much.
So I did the only thing that seemed possible in that moment. I took the paw and I made the last wish. I cannot bring myself to write the words here; they are still on my tongue like ash. If you ask what I begged for, I will tell you only this: I used what little power remained to stop that knocking. I wished away whatever was coming.
When the knocking ceased, a silence dropped over the house like a shroud. Mrs. White flung the door wide with that frantic, animal hope and there was — nothing. Just the empty street, the moonlight on the step, the cold wind. I saw the sudden, terrible dawning on her face, and then the horror. She knew — she knew what I had done, or she at once suspected. Her hands went to her mouth; she collapsed onto the floor in a wail that will haunt me until my dying day.
What do I believe happened? I cannot be certain. Part of me hopes that the wish brought him home whole. Another part — the cruel, rational part — knows better: those things are not so simple. The paw does not give life back as it was; it twists and answers in its own perverse way. I fear that something malformed, something not my son, may have been at the door. I feared that more than death. I wished it gone.
Regrets — how many? I regret my lightness with the strange and the dangerous. I regret letting my curiosity and my longing for a small sum of money thread the rope that strangled my son. I regret not listening to Morris when I had the chance to refuse the thing altogether. Most of all, I regret that in trying to spare my wife from seeing whatever horror might have been at the threshold, I have taken from her the last, stubborn hope that some miracle might have been true. Perhaps I have murdered the only thing that kept her living.
If there is any comfort left, it is small and bitter: that now there will be no more wishes for us to be tempted by, and the paw is gone from our house. But that comfort is hollow. What use is the end of temptation when it has already exacted such a price?
I do not know how to face tomorrow. I do not know if I can look at my wife without seeing that moment at the door, without hearing anew each hesitant knock. I wish I had never laughed at superstition, never made a joke of things that are older and stranger than we are. I wish Herbert still sat at the table and teased me about my old slippers.
Forgive me, child. If there is a God, let Him forgive me also.
— J. White
Tonight I have done something for which there can be no penance, and even these hands tremble to set it down. The house is still now, but my head is full of the knocking and that dreadful, creeping sound at the door that will not leave me.
It began as all of it began — with a foolish, idle joke. How small a thing, a thoughtless wish for two hundred pounds, and how monstrous in its consequence. I have walked the rooms a hundred times and can still see Herbert laughing at my foolishness, alive and cheeky, and then the next day — nothing. Two hundred pounds and a son's absence. That money sits on the mantel-piece like a small, fat ghost.
Sergeant-Major Morris warned me, he warned us, as plainly as any voice can warn a man of his fate, and I laughed him off. "Monkey's paw," he said. "Three wishes. Don't be a fool with it." God forgive me, I was the fool. How I wish he had burned it before it reached our door.
Mrs. White is shattered — more shattered than I have words for. After that second wish — God help me — when she took the paw and cried for our boy to come back, I stood rooted, listening as if I could hold time with my ears. Then the knocking started: slow, uncertain at first, then, as if gathering courage, driving itself into the nerves.
She raved, and with that feverish hope that only a mother can have, she fumbled with the bolts and the door. I saw the lines of her face, the wildness, the hands of a woman who had lost all restraint. I could not let her open that door. I could not have her see what might stand there — some horror stitched together by a wish and the loopholes of fate. The thought of her shrinking back from her own son, or of what might lurk on the threshold and harm her, was too much.
So I did the only thing that seemed possible in that moment. I took the paw and I made the last wish. I cannot bring myself to write the words here; they are still on my tongue like ash. If you ask what I begged for, I will tell you only this: I used what little power remained to stop that knocking. I wished away whatever was coming.
When the knocking ceased, a silence dropped over the house like a shroud. Mrs. White flung the door wide with that frantic, animal hope and there was — nothing. Just the empty street, the moonlight on the step, the cold wind. I saw the sudden, terrible dawning on her face, and then the horror. She knew — she knew what I had done, or she at once suspected. Her hands went to her mouth; she collapsed onto the floor in a wail that will haunt me until my dying day.
What do I believe happened? I cannot be certain. Part of me hopes that the wish brought him home whole. Another part — the cruel, rational part — knows better: those things are not so simple. The paw does not give life back as it was; it twists and answers in its own perverse way. I fear that something malformed, something not my son, may have been at the door. I feared that more than death. I wished it gone.
Regrets — how many? I regret my lightness with the strange and the dangerous. I regret letting my curiosity and my longing for a small sum of money thread the rope that strangled my son. I regret not listening to Morris when I had the chance to refuse the thing altogether. Most of all, I regret that in trying to spare my wife from seeing whatever horror might have been at the threshold, I have taken from her the last, stubborn hope that some miracle might have been true. Perhaps I have murdered the only thing that kept her living.
If there is any comfort left, it is small and bitter: that now there will be no more wishes for us to be tempted by, and the paw is gone from our house. But that comfort is hollow. What use is the end of temptation when it has already exacted such a price?
I do not know how to face tomorrow. I do not know if I can look at my wife without seeing that moment at the door, without hearing anew each hesitant knock. I wish I had never laughed at superstition, never made a joke of things that are older and stranger than we are. I wish Herbert still sat at the table and teased me about my old slippers.
Forgive me, child. If there is a God, let Him forgive me also.
— J. White
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