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Read the sentence from an informative essay about globalization in China.
Pollution levels in Beijing are improving in some ways thanks to government programs.
What would most improve the sentence?
Responses
removing “in Beijing”
removing “in Beijing”
removing “in some ways”
removing “in some ways”
adding facts and evidence
adding facts and evidence
adding clearer language
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adding facts and evidence
Why: as an informative-essay sentence it’s vague. Give specifics (which pollutants, by how much, when, and what government programs) to support the claim.
Example revision: "Since 2013 Beijing’s average PM2.5 concentrations have fallen after the government implemented the Air Pollution Prevention and Control Action Plan and restricted coal use in urban areas."
Why: as an informative-essay sentence it’s vague. Give specifics (which pollutants, by how much, when, and what government programs) to support the claim.
Example revision: "Since 2013 Beijing’s average PM2.5 concentrations have fallen after the government implemented the Air Pollution Prevention and Control Action Plan and restricted coal use in urban areas."
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