Question

Which revised version makes the original sentence much clearer?

Original: After finishing our project in class, our teacher asked for our presentation.

After we finished our project in class, our teacher asked us to turn it in.

After finishing our project in class, our presentation was asked for.

The sentence is correct as it is written.

The teacher asked for our presentation after finishing our project in class.

Answer 1

"After we finished our project in class, our teacher asked us to turn it in."

This version fixes the dangling modifier by making the subject who finished the project explicit ("we") and clarifies the teacher's request ("asked us to turn it in").