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Which sentence makes the best use of descriptive language?
Malia grabbed her suitcase and purse and headed to the nearby airport.
The piercing squeal of tires on asphalt startled Katrina from a deep sleep.
Tara wanted a job so she could save enough money to buy a new bike.
In the morning, it was windy enough to fly the kite Johnny had purchased.
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Sentence 2: "The piercing squeal of tires on asphalt startled Katrina from a deep sleep."
Why: it uses vivid, sensory language ("piercing squeal," "tires on asphalt") and shows an immediate physical and emotional reaction, creating a clear mental image. The others are more functional or abstract and offer less sensory detail.
Why: it uses vivid, sensory language ("piercing squeal," "tires on asphalt") and shows an immediate physical and emotional reaction, creating a clear mental image. The others are more functional or abstract and offer less sensory detail.
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