Asked by berlanda

Nova revised her verb phrase, "applied for the scholarship" to "rigorously pursued the scholarship," to include vivid imagery.

How did Nova’s revision impact her writing?

It established a clear setting for the reader.
It created a sense of calm in the narrative.
It engaged the senses creating excitement.
It lowered the intensity of the verb.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
It engaged the senses creating excitement.

Explanation: "Rigorously pursued" is more vivid and intense than the neutral "applied for," adding energy and a sense of effort/urgency that makes the action more dramatic.