Asked by amori
Select the TWO underlined parts of the sentence that should be revised to correct punctuation errors.
Aiden described his weekend at Thrill Zone Park: riding the Sky Drop Tower; which lifts riders 200 feet into the air; eating funnel cake, cotton candy, and pretzels; screaming on the Lightning Loop roller coaster; and watching the fireworks show; that ended the night.
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Change the semicolon after "Tower;" to a comma, and remove the semicolon before "that ended the night."
Rationale: "which lifts riders 200 feet into the air" is a nonrestrictive clause and should be set off with a comma, not a semicolon. "that ended the night" is a restrictive modifier of "fireworks show" and should not be separated by a semicolon.
Rationale: "which lifts riders 200 feet into the air" is a nonrestrictive clause and should be set off with a comma, not a semicolon. "that ended the night" is a restrictive modifier of "fireworks show" and should not be separated by a semicolon.
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