Asked by kj

Select the TWO underlined parts of the sentence that should be revised to correct punctuation errors.

Aiden described his weekend at Thrill Zone Park: riding the Sky Drop Tower; which lifts riders 200 feet into the air; eating funnel cake, cotton candy, and pretzels; screaming on the Lightning Loop roller coaster; and watching the fireworks show; that ended the night.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
Change the semicolon before "which lifts riders 200 feet into the air" and the semicolon before "that ended the night."

Corrected sentence:
Aiden described his weekend at Thrill Zone Park: riding the Sky Drop Tower, which lifts riders 200 feet into the air; eating funnel cake, cotton candy, and pretzels; screaming on the Lightning Loop roller coaster; and watching the fireworks show that ended the night.