Asked by nano

Which sentence most needs to be revised because its description is too vague?

We hiked two miles uphill in the blooming forest today.
We sprinted back and forth in the stuffy high school gym.
We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there.
We stretched and then slowly jogged once around the track.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
Sentence 3: "We had to walk up several flights of stairs to get there."

Why: "Several" is vague — it doesn't say how many flights or how many steps.

Revision options:
- More specific: "We had to walk up four flights of stairs to get there."
- Or give steps: "We climbed about 60 steps to get there."