Question

Mario is taking a creative writing class he turns into story that he thinks it's pretty good his instructor let him know that the story is core is good it was hard to imagine what the characters look like and what they were feeling based on this feedback what does Mario most likely likely need to add to the story

Answer 1

He needs more character description and emotional detail — in other words, show rather than tell. Add sensory details about what characters look like and do, plus body language, dialogue, and interior thoughts so readers can picture them and feel what they feel.

Example: instead of "Maria was nervous," write "Maria twisted the strap of her bag between pale fingers, lips pressed into a thin line as she kept glancing at the clock."