Question

Read the sentence.

When Breanna and her sister began baking the cake, she realized they were out of flour.

Which correction would make this sentence more clear?

changing “her sister” to “the girl”
changing “she” to “Breanna”
changing “Breanna” to “she”
changing “flour” to “it”

Answer 1

changing “she” to “Breanna”

This removes the ambiguous pronoun (it’s unclear whether “she” refers to Breanna or her sister).