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When revising a narrative essay, the writer should include
that allows the reader to see, smell, hear, feel, and taste what is going on in the story.
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Include sensory details (sensory imagery) that allow the reader to see, smell, hear, feel, and taste what is going on.
Example: instead of "The cake was good," write "The warm vanilla aroma drifted from the kitchen, the cake's golden crust crackling as I sliced it; frosting melted on my tongue, sweet and buttery."
Example: instead of "The cake was good," write "The warm vanilla aroma drifted from the kitchen, the cake's golden crust crackling as I sliced it; frosting melted on my tongue, sweet and buttery."
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