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Driving to the fair was a troublesome, difficult situation today. We planned on leaving at 5:30 p.m., which was unfortunately during rush hour. The traffic would be horrible and we did not want to be stuck. We decided to consult a map in an attempt to find an alternative route.
Which sentence should be rewritten to improve the clarity of the paragraph?
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Sentence 1.
It's wordy and redundant ("troublesome, difficult"). Better: "Driving to the fair was difficult today." or more specific: "Driving to the fair was difficult today because of rush-hour traffic."
It's wordy and redundant ("troublesome, difficult"). Better: "Driving to the fair was difficult today." or more specific: "Driving to the fair was difficult today because of rush-hour traffic."
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