Asked by Alto saxaphone
There was something unknowable about her smile. Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out what she was thinking.
Which revision would introduce an allusion to make the description more vivid?
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Responses
add “in a million years” after “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out”
add “in a million years” after “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out”
replace “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out” with “Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn’t have figured out”
replace “Try as I might, I couldn’t figure out” with “Even with the skills of Sherlock himself, I couldn’t have figured out”
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
add “like a mysterious old song” after “smile”
add “like a mysterious old song” after “smile”
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replace “smile” with “Mona Lisa smile”
This alludes to Leonardo da Vinci’s Mona Lisa and evokes the famous enigmatic expression, making the description more vivid.
This alludes to Leonardo da Vinci’s Mona Lisa and evokes the famous enigmatic expression, making the description more vivid.
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