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What is the best way to revise the paragraph to connect ideas?
by splitting sentence 1 into two sentences to separate the ideas
by splitting sentence 2 into two sentences to separate the ideas
by combining sentences 2 and 3 with the transition word therefore
by combining sentences 4 and 5 with the transition word so
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Combining sentences 2 and 3 with the transition word "therefore."
This revision clearly links the cause and effect (or reason and result) in those sentences, improving flow and coherence. Splitting sentences would isolate related ideas, and using "so" is less formal and weaker than "therefore."
This revision clearly links the cause and effect (or reason and result) in those sentences, improving flow and coherence. Splitting sentences would isolate related ideas, and using "so" is less formal and weaker than "therefore."
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