Question

Which of these sentences is best written?
A.
Visions of waterfalls and sounds of ocean waves remembering the trip to Maui come to Claudia's mind.
B.
To Claudia's mind come visions of waterfalls and sounds of ocean waves, the trip to Maui, remembering.
C.
When she remembers the trip to Maui, visions of waterfalls and sounds of ocean waves come to Claudia's mind.
D.
Remembering the trip to Maui, visions of waterfalls and sounds of ocean waves come to Claudia's mind.

Answer 1

C.

Options A and D contain dangling/misplaced modifiers (they imply the visions or sounds are doing the remembering). B is awkward and ungrammatical. C is clear and grammatically correct.