Question

The day was bright and sunny the weather was perfect for a picnic. However, we forgot to bring a blanket we had to sit on the grass. The kids played games like soccer, tag and frisbee. Everyone had a great time."
fix this sentences

Answer 1

Here are two corrected options:

Simple correction:
"The day was bright and sunny, and the weather was perfect for a picnic. However, we forgot to bring a blanket, so we had to sit on the grass. The kids played games like soccer, tag, and frisbee. Everyone had a great time."

More natural/concise:
"The day was bright and sunny—perfect for a picnic. We forgot to bring a blanket, so we had to sit on the grass. The kids played soccer, tag, and frisbee, and everyone had a great time."

Notes: I fixed run-on sentences, added needed punctuation and conjunctions, and included a comma in the list (Oxford comma) for clarity.