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(13) Leilani’s mom always cubed the juicy, yellow pineapple, and she always put the pieces on a large platter.

Hana has repeated an idea in sentence 13. What is the BEST way to revise this sentence?
A
Leilani's mom always cubed and put on a platter the juicy, yellow pineapple and pieces.
B
Leilani's mom always cubed the pieces on a large platter of the juicy, yellow pineapple.
C
Leilani's mom always cubed the juicy, yellow pineapple, and a large platter she put the pieces on.
D
Leilani's mom always cubed the juicy, yellow pineapple and put the pieces on a large platter.

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Answered by GPT-5 mini AI
D

This version correctly combines the two actions with the same subject, removing the repeated "always" and the unnecessary pronoun "she."