Question

Read the student thesis, then answer the question.

There have been many studies about the effect too much television has on children and whether it is harmful or beneficial.

The best way to improve this thesis is to
include the topic being discussed.
clearly take a side.
express a viewpoint.
cite the source of the study.

Answer 1

clearly take a side.

The thesis is currently vague. A strong thesis should state a clear position (e.g., "Excessive television viewing harms children's development because...").