Although she is good story teller but her purpose of tales is not to amuse and entertain the shaharyar. She has messages behind every tale and she want to teach the king how to overcome from his past life and she wants to bring him back in the real world, where different kind of people lives. They could be cunning, lovely, hatred, honest, and tricksters. And she also wants to show him through her stories that not only female gender dishonest and wicked, Man is also false, untrustworthy, corrupt and insincere
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Although she is good story teller but her purpose of tales is not to amuse and entertain the shaharyar. Fragment; not a complete sentence; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm
She has messages behind every tale and she want to teach the king how to overcome from his past life and she wants to bring him back in the real world, where different kind of people lives. Too long for one sentence; needs to be divided into two sentences; it's technically not a run-on, but it's close; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
They could be cunning, lovely, hatred, honest, and tricksters. non-parallel construction: you have 3 adjectives and 1 noun in the series; make them all adjectives or all nouns; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
And she also wants to show him through her stories that not only female gender dishonest and wicked, Man is also false, untrustworthy, corrupt and insincere
It's not a good idea to start sentences with coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, nor...); run-on; lack of end punctuation
She has messages behind every tale and she want to teach the king how to overcome from his past life and she wants to bring him back in the real world, where different kind of people lives. Too long for one sentence; needs to be divided into two sentences; it's technically not a run-on, but it's close; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm
They could be cunning, lovely, hatred, honest, and tricksters. non-parallel construction: you have 3 adjectives and 1 noun in the series; make them all adjectives or all nouns; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm
And she also wants to show him through her stories that not only female gender dishonest and wicked, Man is also false, untrustworthy, corrupt and insincere
It's not a good idea to start sentences with coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, nor...); run-on; lack of end punctuation
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