Question

Although she is good story teller but her purpose of tales is not to amuse and entertain the shaharyar. She has messages behind every tale and she want to teach the king how to overcome from his past life and she wants to bring him back in the real world, where different kind of people lives. They could be cunning, lovely, hatred, honest, and tricksters. And she also wants to show him through her stories that not only female gender dishonest and wicked, Man is also false, untrustworthy, corrupt and insincere

Answer 1

And your question?

Answer 2

check the english of this paragraph.

Answer 3

Although she is good story teller but her purpose of tales is not to amuse and entertain the shaharyar. <b>Fragment; not a complete sentence; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/fragments.htm </b>

She has messages behind every tale and she want to teach the king how to overcome from his past life and she wants to bring him back in the real world, where different kind of people lives. <b>Too long for one sentence; needs to be divided into two sentences; it's technically not a run-on, but it's close; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/runons.htm </b>

They could be cunning, lovely, hatred, honest, and tricksters. <b>non-parallel construction: you have 3 adjectives and 1 noun in the series; make them all adjectives or all nouns; http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/parallelism.htm </b>

And she also wants to show him through her stories that not only female gender dishonest and wicked, Man is also false, untrustworthy, corrupt and insincere
<b>It's not a good idea to start sentences with coordinating conjunctions (and, but, or, nor...); run-on; lack of end punctuation</b>

Answer 4

thanks