Question

Don't forget how manytimes, Marshall lands on his bottom on top of Skye, ore can beside her, it us embaring, confusing and galirys, when comes to thinking how he fans into the puos, in the Lookout, when Ryder calks, when someone needs help!

Answer 1

I think you meant something like this — pick the version that fits best or tell me what you meant by "fans into the puos" and I’ll adjust:

1) Literal correction:
"Don't forget how many times Marshall lands on his bottom on top of Skye or right beside her. It's embarrassing, confusing, and galling when you think about how he acts around the other pups in the Lookout when Ryder calls for help."

2) More natural:
"Don't forget how often Marshall ends up sitting on his rear — sometimes on top of Skye or right next to her. It's embarrassing and awkward, especially when he behaves like that around the other pups at the Lookout whenever Ryder calls."

3) Short version:
"Remember how many times Marshall falls on his bottom on top of or beside Skye? It's embarrassing and awkward, especially when Ryder calls the pups to help."

Would you like a different tone (funny, serious, or kid-friendly)?