Question

Well jyst like Marshall's always, gets so close to Skye, when he crashes into other pups, in the Lookout, when Ryder calls he'll gas his bottom, between ontop, or being upside, sitting up, it on his side, or even on his head,oven having his legs spreads, when crashing into everonelse, depending how much Skye rolls her eyes, whenever Marshall, thinks that he is okay, when forgets that he is so clumbsy!

Answer 1

Here’s a cleaned-up version of your paragraph:

Well, just like always, Marshall gets so close to Skye — then promptly crashes into the other pups in the Lookout. When Ryder calls, he ends up on his bottom, on top of someone, upside down, sitting up, on his side, or even on his head with his legs splayed, depending on how he bumps into everyone. No matter how much Skye rolls her eyes, Marshall always thinks he’s fine and forgets how clumsy he really is.

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