Question
Which paragraph would help build tension if added to the story?
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As she struggled to free herself, the bus pulled into view. She waved her O arms wildly, but the driver didn't notice her. And she was still stuck.
What was she going to do? She could not be late to school today.
She pulled on the backpack, but it wouldn't come free. Oh well, she thought to herself, and sat down on the sidewalk. I guess I'll be late today. She watched the bus come and go, resigned to her late arrival.
Sylvia struggled to free herself. Why was she stuck? And what was that
• strange buzzing sound coming from the sky? Suddenly, she woke up to her alarm blaring. It was all a dream!
She yanked hard on the backpack and heard a tearing sound, but she
(1 point)
As she struggled to free herself, the bus pulled into view. She waved her O arms wildly, but the driver didn't notice her. And she was still stuck.
What was she going to do? She could not be late to school today.
She pulled on the backpack, but it wouldn't come free. Oh well, she thought to herself, and sat down on the sidewalk. I guess I'll be late today. She watched the bus come and go, resigned to her late arrival.
Sylvia struggled to free herself. Why was she stuck? And what was that
• strange buzzing sound coming from the sky? Suddenly, she woke up to her alarm blaring. It was all a dream!
She yanked hard on the backpack and heard a tearing sound, but she
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"She yanked hard on the backpack and heard a tearing sound, but she"
This sentence creates immediate suspense (a tearing sound) and ends on an abrupt cliffhanger, making the reader eager to know what happens next.
This sentence creates immediate suspense (a tearing sound) and ends on an abrupt cliffhanger, making the reader eager to know what happens next.
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