Question
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Sep 26 - 11:45 pm
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Revising and Editing
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Valentina is writing a blog post about visiting her city. In her blog post, four sections of text have been underlined. In each instance, the underlined text may require a correction or revision. Read Valentina's blog post, paying special attention to the underlined text, and then answer the questions that follow.
What to Do in Sommerville
(1) As a teen living in Sommerville, I’ve come across all kinds of amazing things to see and do in my city. (2) In this post, a number of options visitors should check out are described by me.
(3) If you like to hike, bike, or kayak, then you’ll find many places where you can enjoy the great weather and scenery along Sommerville’s lakes. (4) Echo Lake, Zimmer Park, and Buffalo Creek Greenbelt are among my favorite spots.
(5) If your goal is to soak up some culture in the form of art and history, add a visit to the Sommerville Museum of Art and Technology to your to-do list. (6) This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside works of art. (7) The museum Contemporary Sommerville, which specializes in modern art, has special programs for teens, including art lessons and exhibitions featuring young local artists.
(8) There are a lot of coffeehouses and restaurants that feature live music where teens are welcome. (9) If you are feeling hungry, the city’s many restaurants have something for everyone’s tastes. (10) My school even has a Foodie Club that regularly visits Sommerville’s many food trucks. (11) For seafood, I especially enjoy the restaurant El Pescador Morado. (12) A person prepares each dish from scratch, which takes time, but the results are worth the wait!
(13) Whatever your interest or style from culture to kayaks to coffeehouses Sommerville has it going on. (14) See you somewhere!
Which revision of sentence 6 correctly adds a participle to modify the phrase “works of art”?
A. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside works of art to admire.
B. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside beautiful works of art.
C. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside fascinating works of art.
D. This innovative museum features celebrated science displays alongside works of art.
Sep 26 - 11:45 pm
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Revising and Editing
Follow the directions below to complete this section.
Valentina is writing a blog post about visiting her city. In her blog post, four sections of text have been underlined. In each instance, the underlined text may require a correction or revision. Read Valentina's blog post, paying special attention to the underlined text, and then answer the questions that follow.
What to Do in Sommerville
(1) As a teen living in Sommerville, I’ve come across all kinds of amazing things to see and do in my city. (2) In this post, a number of options visitors should check out are described by me.
(3) If you like to hike, bike, or kayak, then you’ll find many places where you can enjoy the great weather and scenery along Sommerville’s lakes. (4) Echo Lake, Zimmer Park, and Buffalo Creek Greenbelt are among my favorite spots.
(5) If your goal is to soak up some culture in the form of art and history, add a visit to the Sommerville Museum of Art and Technology to your to-do list. (6) This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside works of art. (7) The museum Contemporary Sommerville, which specializes in modern art, has special programs for teens, including art lessons and exhibitions featuring young local artists.
(8) There are a lot of coffeehouses and restaurants that feature live music where teens are welcome. (9) If you are feeling hungry, the city’s many restaurants have something for everyone’s tastes. (10) My school even has a Foodie Club that regularly visits Sommerville’s many food trucks. (11) For seafood, I especially enjoy the restaurant El Pescador Morado. (12) A person prepares each dish from scratch, which takes time, but the results are worth the wait!
(13) Whatever your interest or style from culture to kayaks to coffeehouses Sommerville has it going on. (14) See you somewhere!
Which revision of sentence 6 correctly adds a participle to modify the phrase “works of art”?
A. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside works of art to admire.
B. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside beautiful works of art.
C. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside fascinating works of art.
D. This innovative museum features celebrated science displays alongside works of art.
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The best revision of sentence 6 that correctly adds a participle to modify the phrase "works of art" is:
**B. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside beautiful works of art.**
In this option, "beautiful" is an adjective that effectively modifies "works of art," enhancing the description of the art displayed in the museum. Other options either do not use a participle or change the meaning in a way that is less relevant to enhancing "works of art."
**B. This innovative museum features informative science displays alongside beautiful works of art.**
In this option, "beautiful" is an adjective that effectively modifies "works of art," enhancing the description of the art displayed in the museum. Other options either do not use a participle or change the meaning in a way that is less relevant to enhancing "works of art."