The first sentence needs 3 capital letters and correct end punctuation.
The second sentences is fine.
Please correct the following sentence for a daily oral language question:
we will see a play called cinderella on tuesday
I do not agree with how it was graded.
3 answers
Better phrasing for the first sentence is to move "on Tuesday" to the very beginning of the sentence.
Cinderella also needs to be italicized or underlined.