Question
Read the excerpt from Paolo’s personal narrative, “The Amusement Park.”
The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.
Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?
“The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old.”
“I remember feeling both terrified and excited.”
“I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up.”
“My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.”
The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old. I remember feeling both terrified and excited. I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up. My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.
Which sentence is the best example of a vivid sensory detail?
“The first time I rode a roller coaster, I was nine years old.”
“I remember feeling both terrified and excited.”
“I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up.”
“My sister and I waited in line for an hour, which only made me more nervous.”
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The best example of a vivid sensory detail is: “I had goosebumps, and the hairs on my arms were standing straight up.” This sentence effectively evokes a physical sensation that enhances the reader's understanding of Paolo's emotional state.
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