Question
You’ve almost completed your thoughtful, well-worded email. Now, it’s time to sign off with a few last lines that indicate Violet and Noah were respectful in their interactions with you.
Your first draft is as follows:
“Working with Violet and Noah was chill. They asked tons of questions and were good kids.”
How can you self-edit and make this first draft sound like less of a text and more like a professionally written communication?
Question 9 options:
Working with Violet and Noah was good. They had lots of questions and were respectful.
Working with Violet and Noah was a pleasant experience. They asked tons of questions and were respectful.
Violent and Noah were good kids. They asked lots of questions and were respectful.
Working with Violet and Noah was a pleasant experience. They were curious and respectful.
Your first draft is as follows:
“Working with Violet and Noah was chill. They asked tons of questions and were good kids.”
How can you self-edit and make this first draft sound like less of a text and more like a professionally written communication?
Question 9 options:
Working with Violet and Noah was good. They had lots of questions and were respectful.
Working with Violet and Noah was a pleasant experience. They asked tons of questions and were respectful.
Violent and Noah were good kids. They asked lots of questions and were respectful.
Working with Violet and Noah was a pleasant experience. They were curious and respectful.
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The best option for making your email sound more professional is:
**Working with Violet and Noah was a pleasant experience. They were curious and respectful.**
This choice maintains a positive tone and uses more formal language, making it appropriate for professional communication.
**Working with Violet and Noah was a pleasant experience. They were curious and respectful.**
This choice maintains a positive tone and uses more formal language, making it appropriate for professional communication.