Here’s the classification of each piece of feedback:
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Clarity and Coherence: I’m not sure I understand the connection you’re making between students’ amount of homework and test scores. Can you please explain it?
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Syntax and Diction: When you say “clandestine,” do you mean “secret”? Why did you choose that word?
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Clarity and Coherence: I don’t think I understand what you mean by “absolutism.” Can you please rephrase that?
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Clarity and Coherence: I’m not following your line of reasoning about the effects of high-impact training. Can you elaborate?
The first, third, and fourth pieces of feedback focus on clarity and coherence, while the second piece pertains to syntax and diction.