Sure, I can help you with that. However, since I don't have access to your story, I'll offer a template you can use to insert your examples.
Narrative Techniques
First narrative technique: Dialogue
Example from my story:
“I can’t believe you did that!” Sarah exclaimed, her voice rising. “You were supposed to tell me the truth!”
Second narrative technique: Flashback
Example from my story:
As she looked at the old photograph, memories flooded back—the summer they spent building sandcastles on the beach, laughter echoing in her mind like a distant song.
Figurative Language
First example of figurative language from my story:
“The wind whispered secrets through the trees.”
Type of figurative language:
Personification
Second example of figurative language from my story:
“Her heart was a fragile glass, ready to shatter at any moment.”
Type of figurative language:
Simile
Third example of figurative language from my story:
“Time slipped away like sand through her fingers.”
Type of figurative language:
Metaphor
Feel free to replace the placeholders with the actual excerpts from your story to complete the task!