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OBITUARY
Nonhlanhla Pauline Mazibuko
27 November 1944 – 17 July 2025
It is with great sadness that we announce the passing of Nonhlanhla Pauline Mazibuko on Thursday, 17 July 2025. She was the beloved daughter of the late Hlohlobela George and Nokufa Salamina Shabangu. Born at Orlando East, she grew up in Jabavu emasakeni before later moving to White City Jabavu.
Nonhlanhla attended Jabavu East Community School and subsequently Isaacson Community School. She began her career at Everlast Clothing and later worked at KNR. Married to Abram Mangaliso Mazibuko, she was a dedicated mother to seven children. She is survived by her two sons, Sakhi and Bonginkosi, along with 12 grandchildren and 22 great-grandchildren. Nonhlanhla is also remembered by her 3 siblings, nieces, nephews, cousins, and many cherished friends.
Living her life by the wisdom of Exodus 20:12: “Honor your father and your mother, so that you may live long in the land the Lord your God is giving you,” she left a lasting impact on all who knew her.
Lala ngoxolo Mazibuko, Manzezulu, Nina basemangweni, Muna, Mwelase.
“NZIMA”
ACKNOWLEDGEMENTS
The family wishes to express their sincere gratitude to all those who have supported us during this time of loss. Your kindness, love, and support mean the world to us.
— The Mazibuko Family
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