Question
would it make sense to say: (i am writing a report on rousseau's belief in the social contract)
"....in which people come to accept the rules of society and agree to follow and pertain to them." ??
thanks, and feedback on making this sentence better? i'm not quite sure i'm fond of the way it sounds. thanks, and much appreciated everyone:)
"....in which people come to accept the rules of society and agree to follow and pertain to them." ??
thanks, and feedback on making this sentence better? i'm not quite sure i'm fond of the way it sounds. thanks, and much appreciated everyone:)
Answers
The Official Pancake Queen
I think the sentence is quite good, maybe add a little more detail.
nicole
okay, thank you so much(:
The Official Pancake Queen
Okay, you're welcome. =3
Ms. Sue
I don't understand the use of the word "pertain" in this sentence.
Do you mean ". . . agree to follow and promote them . . ."?
Do you mean ". . . agree to follow and promote them . . ."?
nicole
yes! that's what was wrong...
i knew something didn't sound right in that statement...
i knew something didn't sound right in that statement...
The Official Pancake Queen
Whoops......I'm sorry.......Dx
Ms. Sue
Ms. Queen -- please only respond to questions when you're sure you know the answer. It's not fair to others to post wrong or misleading answers.