Asked by nicole

would it make sense to say: (i am writing a report on rousseau's belief in the social contract)
"....in which people come to accept the rules of society and agree to follow and pertain to them." ??
thanks, and feedback on making this sentence better? i'm not quite sure i'm fond of the way it sounds. thanks, and much appreciated everyone:)
Answered by The Official Pancake Queen
I think the sentence is quite good, maybe add a little more detail.
Answered by nicole
okay, thank you so much(:
Answered by The Official Pancake Queen
Okay, you're welcome. =3
Answered by Ms. Sue
I don't understand the use of the word "pertain" in this sentence.

Do you mean ". . . agree to follow and promote them . . ."?

Answered by nicole
yes! that's what was wrong...
i knew something didn't sound right in that statement...
Answered by The Official Pancake Queen
Whoops......I'm sorry.......Dx
Answered by Ms. Sue
Ms. Queen -- please only respond to questions when you're sure you know the answer. It's not fair to others to post wrong or misleading answers.

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