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Nyobora summer program’s training
About We Got Your Back
We Got Your Back (WGYB) is a non-government organization legally registered under Rwandan law. It was founded in 2019 by young people strongly committed to empowering children and youth from underserved communities. It envisions a community where every child and youth has access to the essential skills, knowledge, resources, and opportunities to unlock and realize their full potential. Our mission is to empower and inspire children and youth by offering a nurturing environment, comprehensive support, meaningful opportunities, and resources to promote their health, education, well-being, and development.

Nyobora summer program

The Nyobora Summer Program is designed to offer students a rich, immersive experience focused on digital self discovery, digital literacy & technology skills, critical thinking & problem solving skills ,communication & public speaking,entrepreneurship & financial literacy and life skills & emotional intelligence. Held during the summer break (2 months), the program specifically targets high school and university students on holiday, providing them with meaningful engagement through interactive activities. It aims to reduce the unemployment rate , while encouraging personal development, and support the enhancement of academic and life skills which will help their self expression for job opportunities .
Objectives of the training
Skills Development: Teach practical skills such as digital, communication, teamwork, and creativity ,training sessions
Personal Growth: Encourage self-discovery, self expression and to build confidence and self-esteem. Not only that but also support the development of life skills (digital, communication, problem solving ,entrepreneurship and emotional that are essential for future success.
Self discovery: Through life skills and emotional intelligence training will Provide chances for participants to learn about themselves and appreciate diverse identity and perspectives. And encourage inclusivity and suitable opportunities.
Self expression : The program also aims to improve participants’ English speaking skills by creating an environment where they can practice regularly through discussions, presentations, and interactive activities. By engaging in conversations, public speaking exercises, and collaborative projects, students will build confidence and fluency in spoken English, helping them communicate more effectively in academic, professional, and social settings.
Expected Outcomes:
career readiness : Participants will gain specific skills relevant to their interests, thus increasing their employability and readiness for future educational and job opportunities.
Enhanced Academic Performance Improvement in participants' understanding of key academic concepts and increased enthusiasm for learning.
Personal Reflection: Through self discovery participants will apply lessons learned to their lives, setting goals for their future personal and academic endeavors.
Network Building: Self discovery will help the participants to align to suitable Opportunities helping them build a network for future growth and support.
Date and Venue

The program is scheduled to begin on 30th June 2025 and ends on 22nd August 2025, with initial sessions focused on developing essential soft skills. These sessions will aim to equip youth with public speaking abilities, boost their confidence, and enhance both language proficiency and effective communication, leadership and digital skills. All activities will be held at the Nyobora Mentorship Hub, located at Kamonyi - Runda We Got Your Back office, providing a supportive environment for learning and personal growth.
Participants
The Nyobora Summer Program will bring together 30 youth from high schools and universities to take part in a variety of courses aimed at enhancing their skills and preparing them for the job market. The program is designed to help participants gain practical, in-demand skills that complement their academic knowledge, empowering them to be more competitive, confident, and ready for future opportunities.
Training agenda
Month 1
Week 1
Day 1: Basic computer operations
Day 2: Online research and safety
Day 3: Introduction to coding
Day 4 :Graphic design
Day 5: Video editing
Week 2
Day 1: Email & communication tools
Day 2: Analysing real world problems
Day 3: Participation in debates
Day 4: Simulations
Day 5: creative thinking exercises
Week 3
Day 1: Strategy games
Day 2: Decision making tasks
Day 3: writing essays
Day 4: Writing reports
Day 5: writing speeches
Week 4
Day 1 : Practicing public speaking
Day 2: Story telling
Day 3: Group discussions
Day 4: Presentations
Day 5: Listening and feedback skills
Month 2
Week 5
Day 1: Budgeting
Day 2: Saving
Day 3: Generating business ideas
Day 4: Pitching business ideas
Day 5: Goal setting
Week 6
Day 1 : Understanding markets
Day 2 : Running mini projects
Day 3 : Student led businesses
Day 4 : Time management
Day 5 : Goal setting
Week 7
Day 1: Leadership
Day 2: Teamwork
Day 3: Mental health awareness
Day 4: Self awareness
Day 5: Empathy exercises
Week 8
Day 1: Conflict resolution
Day 2: Resilience building
Day 3: Review previous topics
Day 4: Review previous topics
Day 5: Final presentation on key learning

Budget

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Frida Ingabire

1 answer

Your concept note for the Nyobora Summer Program presents a clear and well-structured overview of the initiative, its goals, and objectives. Here are some strengths and suggestions for improvement:

Strengths:

  1. Clear Mission and Vision: The background information on We Got Your Back provides a solid foundation, explaining the organization's commitment to empowering underserved children and youth.

  2. Defined Objectives: The objectives for the program are specific and well-articulated, highlighting skills development, personal growth, self-discovery, and self-expression.

  3. Target Audience: Clearly identifying high school and university students as the target audience helps to tailor the program's content and engagement strategies.

  4. Comprehensive Training Agenda: The agenda is detailed, covering a wide range of relevant topics. This structure gives potential participants a clear idea of what to expect.

  5. Expected Outcomes: The expected outcomes are practical and align well with the program's goals, emphasizing career readiness, academic improvement, and personal development.

Suggestions for Improvement:

  1. Executive Summary: Start with a brief executive summary that encapsulates the essence of the program, highlighting key points such as the purpose, target group, and expected impact.

  2. Budget: The budget section is mentioned but not provided. Including a detailed budget breakdown will help stakeholders understand the financial requirements and potentially attract funding.

  3. Evaluation Metrics: Consider including a section on how you plan to evaluate the program's success. What methods will be used to assess the impact of the training on the participants? This could include surveys, interviews, or performance assessments.

  4. Marketing and Outreach: Briefly outline strategies for reaching out to potential participants. This section could detail how you plan to recruit students and raise awareness about the program.

  5. Inclusion of Stakeholders: Mention any potential partnerships with schools, local businesses, or community organizations that could enhance the program's reach and resources.

  6. Timeline Clarity: Ensure the timeline for the program’s activities is clear, especially regarding the start and end dates, as well as any registration deadlines.

  7. Grammar and Clarity: Review the note for grammatical errors and clarity. For example, "emotional that are essential" could be revised to "emotional intelligence that are essential".

  8. Participant Diversity: Consider addressing how you plan to ensure that the program is inclusive and accessible to a diverse group of participants, particularly those from different backgrounds.

  9. Concluding Remarks: A final section reiterating the impact and importance of the Nyobora Summer Program could strengthen the conclusion of the concept note.

Conclusion:

Overall, the concept note has a strong foundation but could be enhanced with additional details on budget, evaluation, outreach strategies, and clarity in language. Making these improvements will help strengthen your proposal and appeal to potential stakeholders and funding partners.