Question

help me write this in proper english, “ i’m not trying to be bossy here i just wanted to show you the way i feel and i expect you to be by side during this time. i was seeking for your loyalty this past few weeks but you continue to lie to me. each and everytime when i address things that doesn’t sit well with me you are speedy to fight or want to have a victim card, i love you but i think you should just take your time and find yourself you’ll always find the doors opened for you. but for now fix your loyalty”

Answer 1

"I don't mean to sound bossy; I just want to express how I feel and hope that you will stand by my side during this time. I have been looking for your loyalty over the past few weeks, but I feel that you have continued to be dishonest with me. Each time I bring up something that bothers me, you seem quick to respond defensively or play the victim. I love you, but I think it would be beneficial for you to take some time to find yourself. The door will always be open for you. For now, though, I need you to work on being loyal."