What words in the following sentences create a suspenseful mood?

We took the first hiding place we could find, a small space under a stairwell. There we crouched tensely, trembling with fear. The footsteps thudded slowly and heavily toward us. Somewhere in the distance, a car door slammed.

place we could find, somewhere in the distance, door slammed

a small space, trembling, footsteps thudded, a car door slammed

crouched tensely, trembling with fear, thudded slowly and heavily

1 answer

The words that create a suspenseful mood in the provided sentences are:

  • crouched tensely
  • trembling with fear
  • footsteps thudded
  • slowly and heavily
  • a car door slammed

These phrases evoke a sense of anxiety, anticipation, and foreboding, contributing to the overall suspenseful atmosphere of the scene.