Question
Read the sentence from a student’s informative essay.
Dictators often limit people’s freedoms, such as freedom of speech.
Which revision adds domain-specific vocabulary to the sentence?
replacing Dictators with Leaders.
replacing people’s with citizens’
replacing freedoms with actions
replacing of speech with to say things
Dictators often limit people’s freedoms, such as freedom of speech.
Which revision adds domain-specific vocabulary to the sentence?
replacing Dictators with Leaders.
replacing people’s with citizens’
replacing freedoms with actions
replacing of speech with to say things
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The best revision that adds domain-specific vocabulary to the sentence is:
**replacing people’s with citizens’**
This change uses the term "citizens," which is more specific and technical in the context of discussing a government and its impact on rights and freedoms.
**replacing people’s with citizens’**
This change uses the term "citizens," which is more specific and technical in the context of discussing a government and its impact on rights and freedoms.