Question
Read the sentence from a student’s informative essay.
Many democratic governments operate in a system where the person with more votes wins.
Which revision adds domain-specific vocabulary to the sentence?
replacing Many with Multiple
replacing operate in with have
replacing system with way
replacing more votes with a majority of
Many democratic governments operate in a system where the person with more votes wins.
Which revision adds domain-specific vocabulary to the sentence?
replacing Many with Multiple
replacing operate in with have
replacing system with way
replacing more votes with a majority of
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The revision that adds domain-specific vocabulary to the sentence is **replacing more votes with a majority of**. Using "a majority of" introduces a term that is more specific to the context of voting and democratic processes.