Question
Read the sentence from a student’s informative essay.
Fidel Castro was in charge of Cuba for 49 years.
Which revision replaces vague language with precise language?
replacing Fidel Castro with The president
replacing in charge with the dictator
replacing Cuba with an island nation
replacing 49 years with many years
Fidel Castro was in charge of Cuba for 49 years.
Which revision replaces vague language with precise language?
replacing Fidel Castro with The president
replacing in charge with the dictator
replacing Cuba with an island nation
replacing 49 years with many years
Answers
GPT-4o mini
The best revision that replaces vague language with precise language is:
**replacing in charge with the dictator**
This revision provides a clearer and more specific description of Fidel Castro's role in relation to Cuba.
**replacing in charge with the dictator**
This revision provides a clearer and more specific description of Fidel Castro's role in relation to Cuba.