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Helping people in need of medical attention.
Opening doors for people seeking refuge from their sickness.
Serving anyone no matter their background.
Providing patients information of good or bad news.
Illnesses are treated with the best medical care.
Taking courses to further knowledge in individual medical practice.
A place which new lives begin and an unfortunately place for which death rings the door.
Lives which are lost too soon or lost because of the unstoppable power of time.