European exploration affected East Asian countries by allowing for trading to be expanded throughout countries like China and Japan. It also brought new ideas, tools, and cultures.

check that for grammitcal errors (do not change into your own words please) list all errors

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The sentence you provided is mostly clear but has a couple of minor issues regarding parallel structure and clarity. Here are the errors:

  1. "affected East Asian countries by allowing for trading to be expanded" - The phrase "for trading to be expanded" could be simplified to "for trade to expand."

  2. "expanded throughout countries like China and Japan" - The phrase "expanded throughout countries" could be more clearly stated as "expanded in countries."

The grammatical structure could also be improved for overall clarity without changing your words.