Question

Lynne wants to ensure that she in not using any of the vague banned words in her story. To be safe, what word should she avoid in this sentence: The 2021 Tesla Model Y has a lot of new things that could excite buyers.
things
a lot
new
could

Answer 1

Lynne should avoid the word "things" in that sentence, as it is a vague term. It would be more effective to use a more specific word or phrase to convey what "things" refers to.