Read the sentence from a student’s argumentative essay:
Many people think social media has only negative effects, but in reality, it can be a powerful tool for education, connection, and even social change.
Which revision best improves the clarity and formality of the sentence?
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Lots of people think social media is bad, but actually, it's a great way to learn and talk to others and make stuff happen.
While social media is often criticized for its negative impact, it also serves as a valuable platform for education, communication, and social activism.
Some people hate social media, but it’s not all bad because you can use it for learning and talking to people and doing good things.
Even though some people say social media is bad, it’s really good for education and connecting with others and starting change.
1 answer
The revision that best improves the clarity and formality of the sentence is:
"While social media is often criticized for its negative impact, it also serves as a valuable platform for education, communication, and social activism."
This version maintains a formal tone and clearly presents both sides of the argument while using precise language.
