The top of Greg’s resume is shown below. He could improve his resume in all of the following ways, EXCEPT…---La parte superior del currículum de Greg se muestra a continuación. Podría mejorarlo de todas las siguientes maneras, EXCEPTO...

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A.
Add his email address to the header---Añade su dirección de correo electrónico al encabezado

B.
Replace his school name with his personal address in the header---Reemplace el nombre de su escuela con su dirección personal en el encabezado.

C.
Rewrite his objective to be more formal without using “I”---Rewrite his objective to be more formal without using “I”

D.
Format his experience section as a paragraph instead of bullet points---Formatee su sección de experiencia como un párrafo en lugar de viñetas.

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Greg could improve his resume in all of the following ways, EXCEPT:

B. Replace his school name with his personal address in the header - This would not improve his resume, as keeping his school name can provide valuable information about his education and qualifications. Instead, it would be better to include his email address (A) and to format his experience in a clear, organized manner (C and D).