The modifying phrase in the sentence is placed incorrectly. The phrase "once she saves up enough money" should clearly refer to the action of buying shoes, but its placement can make it seem like it refers to "Shoe Empire" instead. A clearer version could be: "Once she saves up enough money, Ana wants to buy new athletic shoes from her favorite store, Shoe Empire."
In which sentence is the modifying phrase placed incorrectly?(1 point)
Ana wants to buy new athletic shoes from her favorite store once she saves up enough money, Shoe Empire.
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