To align the rhetorical strategy of Shirley Chisholm's speech with that of Patrick Henry, the second author could add a sentence that emphasizes urgency and the necessity for action, similar to Henry's declaration of "Give me liberty or give me death!" A fitting sentence might be:
"This inequality is unacceptable, and we must rise together to demand our rightful place in society without delay!"
This sentence mirrors Henry's passionate call to action by underscoring the urgency of the situation and rallying support for immediate change.