In (DELETE "IN.") the short story(COMMA) "Trifles" by Susan Glaspell, describes a wife who slowly loses her identity and conforms her husband’s wishes, which leads her killing to kill her husband. When the Attorney (NO CAPS) and sheriff come to investigate the murder (COMMA) they view the wife as trifling. Because the house is not in order (COMMA) they immediately begin to judge her — not her husband. The Theme (NO CAPS) of the story is based on the power of observation between the men,(NO COMMA, "AND.") women and the role they play in society. Minnie Wright acted out of rage and lost her sanity because of isolation, gender difference(S) and her unhappy marriage. (I ASSUME MINNIE IS THE WIFE, BUT I AM NOT SURE. NAME HER AT THE BEGINNING OF THE PARAGRAPH.)
Caps are for contrast only.
You need to review your use of commas.
http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/607/02/
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In the short story Trifles by Susan Glaspell, describes a wife who slowly loses her identity and conforms her husband’s wishes, which leads her killing to kill her husband. When the Attorney and sheriff come to investigate the murder they view the wife as trifling. Because the house is not in order they immediately begin to judge her-not her husband. The Theme of the story is based on the power of observation between the men, women and the role they play in society. Minnie Wright acted out of rage and lost her sanity because of isolation, gender difference and her unhappy marriage.
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