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To accomplish her goal, Ana needs to wash the dishes, clean her room, and vacuum the living room rug.
To accomplish her goal, Ana needs to wash the dishes, clean her room, and vacuum the living room rug.
If the dishes are not washed, Ana will not receive her weekly allowance.
If the dishes are not washed, Ana will not receive her weekly allowance.
Before she leaves for school, Ana needs to wash the dishes.
Before she leaves for school, Ana needs to wash the dishes.
Ana wants to buy new athletic shoes from her favorite store once she saves up enough money, Shoe Empire.
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The sentence with the modifying phrase placed incorrectly is:
"Ana wants to buy new athletic shoes from her favorite store once she saves up enough money, Shoe Empire."
The phrase "Shoe Empire" is incorrectly placed; it suggests that "once she saves up enough money" modifies "Shoe Empire" instead of "Ana wants to buy new athletic shoes." A clearer and more correct rephrasing would be, "Ana wants to buy new athletic shoes from her favorite store, Shoe Empire, once she saves up enough money."
