The sentence contains two distinct moods: one of enthusiastic invitation ("Let's go to the mall") and another of indifferent or reflective consideration ("or would you rather shop online"). The shift in mood occurs because the first part expresses a proactive and upbeat suggestion, while the second part introduces a more neutral or hesitant choice. To correct this shift in mood, the sentence can be rephrased to maintain consistency by either fully embracing the invitation or the contemplation of options. For instance, one could say, "Let’s go to the mall and enjoy shopping together, or we can consider shopping online if that sounds more convenient," which keeps the encouraging tone throughout by framing both options positively.
Let's go to the mall, or would you rather shop online?
Which two moods does the sentence contain? Explain how to correct the shift in mood. Answer in a paragraph and proofread your work before moving on.
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