Question 1: What sentence can be added after sentence 1 to help develop the introduction to this story?
Best option: Although I had never spoken with him in person, I saw him every time my family and I attended church.
Question 2: What is the BEST transition to add to the beginning of sentence 16?
Best option: Suddenly
Question 3: Amy has included a sentence that does not belong in the third paragraph (sentences 8-15). Which sentence should she remove?
Best option: Christmas lights glistened all throughout our kitchen, their bright lights twinkling and making everything look merry.
Question 4: Amy included a redundant sentence in her sixth paragraph (sentences 26-31). Which sentence should be deleted from the paragraph?
Best option: Robert was looking down at his plate with a reddened face.